jueves, 12 de junio de 2008

Jessica and Adam

Jessica and Adam met five years ago. She was working in London as an architect. One day she saw him in the street while she was walking to the bus station. He was a university student, but was doing a summer job as an employee in a shop. He had come to the place where she was working: in a big corporation, that was located in Oxford street. And that was the first time when they really met.
As Adam was leaving, he left a little message next to Jessica's computer that said: "You are the most beautiful woman I have ever seen, please call me to this number: (480) 781-7800". Jessica phoned him as soon as she arrived at her house and they met the same evening. Adam and Jessica liked each other a lot: they found out that they liked the same food and their favourite music band was "Green day". One day a terrible thing happened. Jessica was hit by a car while she was going to the supermarket. She was badly hurt. Six months later Jessica was OK again. Adam had helped her a lot, because he took her to the hospital and he visited her everyday.

1 comentario:

Jimena Cas dijo...

Very nice story Mati. Congratulations!
It is not very clear if they met a shop, by the street or a big corporaton. Check, please and also some language mistakes, such as:
arrived at
Correct, print and hand in by Friday 20th